More work on my slides

More work on my WriteTheDocs presentation, and it's shaping up nicely. I read through my slides again and made a bunch of edits, mostly to smooth the transitions between sections of the talk. Then I did a whispered practice run, and rearranged the slides some more.

After all of that, I think the logical outline of the talk is in good shape. Timing also seems OK; my whispered run-through took only 15 minutes, and then I took a few slides out, so the talk length should already be below my 20-minute limit.

Next step: a full-voice run-through in my office, and then I need to find pictures to make the slides more interesting.